Original Draft
Revision #1
Tuesday, February 25, 2014
Monday, February 24, 2014
PROJECT4-Participation
Alexander Weitzner - Visuals are good. I'm not crazy about the font/color choice but that's probably just my personal opinion, looks good overall, a bit too much empty space though
Matthew Mensher - Format looks clean and nice. Good use of an uppercase, bold and colored font for titles. I can't seem to grasp how the image at the bottom is related
Matt Fishman - Very nice style and color scheme. Bottom text looks a bit cramped. Image looks good and is well placed so it catches the eye.
Austin Demos - Could use some formatting and style, looks a bit too basic and similar to a word document. Add some similar games as well
Daniyal N. Khan's – Inteesting and unique design. The stick figures make it look a bit amateur but aside from that it looks really nice.
Evan LeClairs - Very nice format and slogan. Pitch looks clean and crisp. My only critique would be to use a larger font for the titles because it looks smaller than the body text.
Ralph Perricelli - Interesting game concept but the pitch design looks a bit amateur. Space out the font more and work on the background a bit more.
Joseph Verducci - Clean looking design but the monochromeness is a bit rough on the eyes. The header font could also be improved to look more engaging. Generally good design.
Matthew Mensher - Format looks clean and nice. Good use of an uppercase, bold and colored font for titles. I can't seem to grasp how the image at the bottom is related
Matt Fishman - Very nice style and color scheme. Bottom text looks a bit cramped. Image looks good and is well placed so it catches the eye.
Austin Demos - Could use some formatting and style, looks a bit too basic and similar to a word document. Add some similar games as well
Daniyal N. Khan's – Inteesting and unique design. The stick figures make it look a bit amateur but aside from that it looks really nice.
Evan LeClairs - Very nice format and slogan. Pitch looks clean and crisp. My only critique would be to use a larger font for the titles because it looks smaller than the body text.
Ralph Perricelli - Interesting game concept but the pitch design looks a bit amateur. Space out the font more and work on the background a bit more.
Joseph Verducci - Clean looking design but the monochromeness is a bit rough on the eyes. The header font could also be improved to look more engaging. Generally good design.
Chris Yowan - N/A
In order to improve the design of my pitch, a good start would be making the “Hide ‘n’ Seek” subheading match more appropriately with the RuneScape logo as it clashes pretty badly right now. Another crucial improvement would be to make the font more fitting to RuneScape’s style and also bold the titles so that they stand out above the body text. I would also change the size of the first image as it’s a bit too small compared to the others. The final improvement I would make would be to improve the general spacing of the document as it’s a bit cramped all around.
In order to improve the design of my pitch, a good start would be making the “Hide ‘n’ Seek” subheading match more appropriately with the RuneScape logo as it clashes pretty badly right now. Another crucial improvement would be to make the font more fitting to RuneScape’s style and also bold the titles so that they stand out above the body text. I would also change the size of the first image as it’s a bit too small compared to the others. The final improvement I would make would be to improve the general spacing of the document as it’s a bit cramped all around.
Tuesday, February 18, 2014
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WK3 Participation
Matt Fishman - Make sure you proofread prior to posting. Add
some more details about the game.
Olivia Gutierrez - Good pitch, you do a good job at making
the reader want to play. Add more details to the walkthrough to avoid
confusion.
John Aromando -Good description but a font with both
uppercase and lowercase letters would look nicer.
Thursday, February 13, 2014
Tuesday, February 11, 2014
Wednesday, February 5, 2014
WK2 Participation
Matt Fishman
1. Format is good and easy to read.Design/style looks a bit amateur.
John Aromando 2. Interesting, unique and non-sequitur design.
Fonts are a bit hard to read and the underline isn't really necessary but looks pretty good overall.
Olivia Gutierrez
3. Consistent color palette and a clean and crisp design. Arrows look a bit strange when you look at them for too long but the design overall is very eye-catching and pleasing to look at.
Tuesday, February 4, 2014
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