John Aromando - Animation is well done but it looks too fast
and choppy. I would slow it down a bit and add some more effects rather than
just the color flash.
Dainyal Khan - The 3 dimensional movement effects are pretty
awesome. Looks very well done although I don't really understand the art behind
the letters.
Matthew Mensher - Timing is odd and the whole thing happens
too fast. I would slow it down a bit to get a better effect out of it.
Ralph Perricelli - Looks very nice, sells exactly what your
logo was going for but in a smoothly animated rework. Good job.
Joseph Verducci - This could definitely use a bit of work.
Not much actually happens besides the color change and the border looks a bit
sloppy. I would add a more noticeable animation and rework the image itself a
bit.
Alexander Weitzner - Looks very nice. It would be perfect if
you removed the fade to white.
Christopher Yowan - Looks pretty decent. I would speed up
the timing of the "unar" coming towards the "L" because it
looks really odd at the current pace.
I did
not receive any comments on my deliverable as it was both improperly labeled
and the animation does not show on blogger. I order to improve this I would get
my animation to display properly so that it actually works and then rename my
post.
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